Hanna (again)

[Phinehas]

A couple more of the photo session from a couple months ago. I kind of put it on the back burner and started going thru them again today.

[dh202]

Excellent Lorey !!
Try and knock off the right side window on #2, almost 1/4 off the side, crop just to the left of that patch of sun on the ground, and leave her almost center in the frame. I think she balances better between the door and window, the extra window is weighting the right side too much I think.

[Phinehas]

Thank you David. Per your suggestion:



And a closer crop:

[Jim Flinchbaugh]

Pic # 1 is stellar in my book Lorey- love the processing

[Daniel Bradley]

Lets crop again.... like we did last su-merrrrr----


Lovely shot! Both are really nice, though the first one is shooting down a little too much for my taste. It does have a lot of feeling, though. Somehow touching. Also like the old, faded painted black and white print look. Straight B+W with a fairly strong sepia tint would also be very nice.

[Phinehas]

Jim and Daniel, I really appreciate the kind comments. I think your crop looks good Daniel but to my eye the background is giving her competition.
Daniel, please make note of my signature. You always give useful and constructive critiques and helpful points and I always appreciate your input. Just asking if you'd be kind enough to respect my request on editing my posts. Thank you.

[Daniel Bradley]

Ooops, sorry. Overlooked that. Won't happen again!
I see what you are saying about the background. It could easily be softened in post. Might be worth a try....

[Phinehas]

No worries, mate!
Thanks. I really like composition on your crop, Daniel, and I'll probably give a try at lightening up the darkest boarded up window.