Which version do you prefer and why

[Bob Wood]

This is one of the young ladies fro the local college.
I know not many of you have an interest in people photography, but I would like to know how you think I am doing.

[Edmunds]

I prefer the color version, but IMO, the biggest problem here is her hand, especially elbow. Its just waaay too big and quite unflattering.

[Bob Wood]

Thank you for pointing out the obvious. this is why a second set of eyes can be a big help

[tomsi42]

Which lens did you use, and at what focal length (if a zoom)? Generally, a longer focal length will give a more flattering view.